Straker Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:58 pm
Fantastic work, Jack, I liked the way his P.O.V shot went red soooo much, I immediately started to dream up how I could use a similar shot in one of my own episodes! (Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery!) Great dialog where he disses Damon's man-in-black persona, a nice way of reminding us that Damon would be seen as a bit of an oddball in real life by the "normal" people around him. And Damon's speech about the dead not being wanted back like this was also top notch scripting!
My only (mild) complaint was I found it hard to comprehend some of the dialog when the deep voice was talking through Josh! A pity, as it was so good. Over all, this was a great episode and I'm really proud to be associated with such a terrific webseries as this!
Bravo, Jack, I hope we see many more like this!
